Rewrites

We've settled on a bunch of changes to the script and I'm plowing through them. Making little corrections like this is a bit like playing a game of pick-up-sticks. You wiggle one line and discover to your dismay that its connected to half-a-dozen more spread out over three different scenes.

Of course, I could just change the line and say fuck it. There's stuff I'm obsessing over that I'm sure no one will ever notice.

But I'll know it's in there ... .